Wednesday, July 2, 2008

I am the only Amos Veloz

I am the only Amos Veloz
I wonder if there is a purpose for me to be here
I hear nothing but great things
I see me sitting on a throne on top of the world
I want to actually rule the world
I am the only Amos Veloz

I pretend to be nothing i am not
I feel that i am better than everybody
I touch nothing but money
I worry about life after death
I cry for my baby and nothing more
I am the only Amos Veloz

I understand that a dream doesn't come true through magic
I say it takes hard work, sweat, and determination to get where you want
I dream BIG all the time
I try to do what i say i am going to do
I hope nothing but the BEST for me
I am the only Amos Veloz

6 comments:

Raymond said...

your page is 2 plain, fix it

melinda said...

oooooooooooooooood...um ur poem is gd ..but i fel like its mean ..and u should be hitler jr.....take over the world umm excuse me i am taking over it soo we will fight get it right...muahahahahahahahaaa

Amanda Rodriguez said...

i think your poem was ok other than the parts u lied aboud. its filled with lies. because u r not better than everyone

hezekiah petersen said...

It was good

hezekiah petersen said...

how are you the only Amos Velos
how you know

Unknown said...

YOU NEED TO WAKE UP THIS IS MY WORLD NOT YOURS GOT IT GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!